TLC by Chrouya Script: Little Busters 08 [tl][#tlc][timed][~edit][#qc] Workraw: Little Busters 08_10bit_a ===Fix the script for capitalization=== ===There are some double spaces=== 13 Don't worry, Rin's up to it. Don't worry, Rin's light enough for the job. {shintainouryoku = physical strength. In this particular context, it's that she's light and agile} 37 Right now, they're working with the Public Morals Committee people on patrol duty desu. Right now, they're working with the Public Morals Committee people on patrol duty. {In my opinion, Kud's characteristic isn't defined by desu, but by her Wahoo's. The emphasis on desu is just because she has a "foreign" accent." 39 So that I wouldn't be lonely desu! so that I wouldn't be lonely! {idem} 46 {TL:I feel like the whole point of this is that so she can use the concept of 'onee-san', since it's a novel concept to her, to have a specific word for older or younger sibling. That's my rationale for keeping onee-san, at least. Also this word order is in order to emphasise onee-san, rather than Strelka and Velka.}So that makes me the onee-san of Strelka and Velka! So that makes me the big sister of Strelka and Belka! {in my opinion, you still keep the same context if you localize this to big sister} {all names refer to the space dogs} 47 Onee-san. The {\i1}big{\i0} sister... {and more pun usage if you put emphasis on this part} 54 They always want to play! They want to play some more! {current situation} 61 Oh right, the recent returnee transfer girl. Oh right, the recent transfer girl. {TL doesn't say returnee} 73 {\an8}TL note: Baseball is so popular in Japan, they gave it a kanji name. 野球 (やきゅう) literally means "field ball". {I would leave out this TL note. The reason why Haruka says baseball is because Kud is a fervent English language learner.} 74 Oooooh, baseball! Yeah I know baseball. Oooooh, baseball! Now that rings a bell. 100 She really acts like a dog, doesn't she. Kuukol. {Not sure what we used in previous episodes for Masato's trademark name-butchering, but I'm going with Cudgel lol} Kuuko really acts like a dog, doesn't she. {kuukou (written as クー公), is just a nice way to address a girl} 110 {has a sign} Congratulations! 112\ {hajimete desu is still part of line 111) 158 How do you like it? Why did you become roommates? 159 If I had expectations, I'd say it reaches them. When I asked for it, we got accepted for it. {strange mistranslations} 193 To the Dorm Chief? {She didn't do this before...?} {as in, consulting} 244 Yoyoyo! Guess who saw that Kud chump's name on the mailing list! {Haruka calls her クド公, which is similar to Masato's kuuko, but then with the first two syllables. Makes Kudoko (or alternatively Kud-ko)} 247 If I lived with Kud-chump, I could twirl her around all day long! If I lived with Kud-ko, I could twirl her around three times a day! 250 Yea. Sowwy, Koo-chan! {Everyone seems to have their own name for her lol} Yea. Sowwy, Kuu-chan! {Everyone seems to have their own name for her lol} {kuu is the accepted spelling} 273 {TL:(/pos(338,206)/frz284.9)The Life of a Woman}{ED:}{\an8}Book title: The Life of a Woman (/pos(338,206)/frz284.9){Sign}Une Vie, Guy de Maupassant 279 Ah, the feels are best when holding Kudryavka-kun 45-degree to the side, after all. {That feel, man.} Ah, the feels are best when holding Kudryavka-kun 45-degree to the side. {That feel, man.} 280 {TL:I know this isn't literal but I'm gonna have to insist on this translation because Yuiko has a serious sub-dom/superiority fetish thing going on xD}All is well, is it not? Noumi, my child.{ED: Chrouya, so what does it say literally?} {She acts like a big sister role, and this suffix of shoujo is the same as calling Riki shounen. I'd go for this translation, or something like "young girl".} 287 Will I be able to restrain myself?? I won't be able to restrain myself ... Are you okay with that? 326 Lately I've been reading books concerning Fermat's final theories. Lately I've been reading books concerning Fermat's Last Theorem. 327 {\pos(336.902,48.909)}[TL Fermat is known for the principle that light travels the route that requires the least time.] {\pos(336.902,48.909)}[TLC: Fermat's Last Theorem revolves around the equation a^n + b^n = c^n.] {someone needs to style that.} 358 Uberbitch (to the rescue?) You there. You there. {actor fail} 374 Well then. Strelka. Velka. Well then. Strelka. Belka. {SIGN EPISODE} Episode 8 "Let's looking for roommate" 385 CHOP CHOP CHOP AAAAND CHOP Chop chop some pork cutlet! *pun intended here*